Collaboration <3
Okay okay I know I've been away for God knows how long but I've been experiencing a severe case of writer's block [...excuses =o=]. So I've decided to post up two utterly random poems Yumimi and I wrote when we were two utterly bored people. Each of us took turns writing a sentence each. Hope you enjoy them (despite the immense gheyness of it all).
Two Fluffy Bunnies
Two fluffy bunnies hopping in the woods,
One with a spear, and one with a hood
The one with a spear poked the other in the eye
And the other fluffy bunny tripped the other with its thigh
Both fluffy bunnies writhed around in pain
Until it started to rain
The rain fell pitter patter
The tripped bunny felt bitter, because its getting wetter
Both bunnies jerked and shivered, and squeezed together
Then while longing dearly for food
Realisation hit them that one of them is wearing a hood
And so 'neath the hood they lay and fell asleep together
So now we come to the end of the Two Fluffy Bunnies' Adventure
Those Four Clouds
The clouds in the sky, lazing around up high
The birds flew by, casting looks of sly
The clouds up high, chatting so fine
Said one, "You look like an ice cream today"
The other, "You look like a stack of hay"
The third, "I look mightiest any time of the day"
And a fourth scorned and said, "You look like a lump of candy"
Offended, the third fluffed itself tremendously
"You are no better, you miserable beardie"
Which made the other clouds start hooting
And so all four of them start fighting
And a random one start singing
The other three turned around in wonder
They gaped and gawked and stared in horror
As the said cloud turned black in colour
"What's happening?" they asked each other
"I think he wasn't singing" said the first
"He was shrieking!" said the third
The wind blew hard, and thunder rolled
Something terrible is about to show
Before they knew it
The black cloud morphed into a ball of fluff
And quickly enlarged into a giant puff
"Whoopee fluffy puff!" cheered all three clouds
And droplets fell from the black cloud roaring loud
And fell as rain to the ground
The other 3 clouds cheered
Until a fierce wind blew
And into nothing all three flew
Two Fluffy Bunnies
Two fluffy bunnies hopping in the woods,
One with a spear, and one with a hood
The one with a spear poked the other in the eye
And the other fluffy bunny tripped the other with its thigh
Both fluffy bunnies writhed around in pain
Until it started to rain
The rain fell pitter patter
The tripped bunny felt bitter, because its getting wetter
Both bunnies jerked and shivered, and squeezed together
Then while longing dearly for food
Realisation hit them that one of them is wearing a hood
And so 'neath the hood they lay and fell asleep together
So now we come to the end of the Two Fluffy Bunnies' Adventure
Those Four Clouds
The clouds in the sky, lazing around up high
The birds flew by, casting looks of sly
The clouds up high, chatting so fine
Said one, "You look like an ice cream today"
The other, "You look like a stack of hay"
The third, "I look mightiest any time of the day"
And a fourth scorned and said, "You look like a lump of candy"
Offended, the third fluffed itself tremendously
"You are no better, you miserable beardie"
Which made the other clouds start hooting
And so all four of them start fighting
And a random one start singing
The other three turned around in wonder
They gaped and gawked and stared in horror
As the said cloud turned black in colour
"What's happening?" they asked each other
"I think he wasn't singing" said the first
"He was shrieking!" said the third
The wind blew hard, and thunder rolled
Something terrible is about to show
Before they knew it
The black cloud morphed into a ball of fluff
And quickly enlarged into a giant puff
"Whoopee fluffy puff!" cheered all three clouds
And droplets fell from the black cloud roaring loud
And fell as rain to the ground
The other 3 clouds cheered
Until a fierce wind blew
And into nothing all three flew
posted by Firesky at
16:53
7 Comments:
Oooo you added a sentence XD It completes the poem no? Hehe I prefer the bunnies XDXDXD We should do more of this once I'm allowed back online XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Yeah I added some stuff to make it look (sound?) more poem-ish rofl. Yeah we should O.o Instead of stories... at least with poems you're sure to complete it =o=
haven't seen you write poems of animals. ^-^ quite interesting, write more kay? can you write a poem on inuyasha?
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errr.... I must say I've never ever received such requests before... but ALRIGHT!!! I SHALL ACCEPT AND TAKE IT AS A CHALLENGE!!!!! JUST YOU WAIT! >D
FUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
hahaha, yay!! yay!! make sure it's a general genre, ^-^ and if you do, i'll write one on kurei and ........
cute and nice poems esp the two fluffy bunnies which is oso funny.
good piece of work.
more collaboration in future, perhaps?
anyway keep it up!
Nyahaha sankyuu! XDD
Yah I have a weird liking for bunnies (Note : -Bunnies-, not Bunny Girls or Guys =.=) XDDD
More collaborations... hopefully (given the circumstances) ^^
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